going off of the review left by wanchot: the guy has a point. its not that you need to prove anything to him specifically, but more that you've managed to cause just about every newgrounder that has come across your "collaborations" to beleive you have lost a lot of your deservedness to be a part of the newgrounds community. for some reason, Fulp seems to be somewhat on your side. now, including myself, most may not directly argue with the judgement of Tom Fulp. However, the reason these video-like abominations are still here is beyond me. we are given the abilities as newgrounds users to rate and vote on things for a reason. we have the open option to say what we do and do not want to be in this online community because we are of its most active region, regardless of whether or not we post any of our own work. and i, for one, plan on using what i am given. so, spit your sarcasm and berate those who dare to give their raw opinion. wanchot was kind with his words, and actually did give you some sort of useful suggestion. mind you, you asked for such reviews.
you may not have to prove anything to wanchot, but you have a hell of a lot to prove to the massed online community that has been disgusted by your posts. it's the community that all of us are a part of. you've shown your ass to the masses; at least smack it for them. try doing something DECENT and maybe some of us can take the passed idiocy in stride.
okay, so this was the first of your videos i have viewed. i then took the time to watch all of your others, and i have come back to this one to comment. for as long as i can rightfully remember, ive been what most people have referred to as different. i saw, spoke, acted, thought, and just a bit unfortunately felt different. in the more recent years of my life, i managed to discover the ultimate excuse for this: im an artist. people questioned a lot less. with the newfound freedom that seemed to follow my having this excuse, i was abled to begin to see and understand things in life that i found crucial. i thought it was absolutely normal to see these things. after all, i didnt see how someone could function otherwise. i certainly had trouble doing it. after i came about these things, i became rather happy with them and began to accept myself for me. i was content, but i didnt stop thinking. i didnt stop discovering. eventually my mind began to stumble upon larger issues such as religion, politics, ect. when came this, i began to discuss things with other people. at this point, it happened that i was no longer just different and whatever came with it. i was recognized as smart. yes, this was nice, and gave me a bit of a boost in self confidence, but didnt help my being a bit outcast for these differences. i felt the need to reach out. somebody else had to see what i saw. it was too blatent and loud to be completely unnoticed. eventually, i found the people i was looking for. recently, i have developed friends like no others, and thoughts with them. with this i was abled to accept myself, not just as myself, but as a part of everything else. my thoughts and ideas furthered and continued, and while i cannot quite share them with friends as id like to, i still gain insight and inspiration from my companions. now, im happy. i have no reason not to be, and i can see why. but i am still looking for something. i think and ponder and philosiphize until i think ive reached what seems like the brink of my realization, and just as i have done this, i stumble upon your videos. i see more than just a familiarity with my thoughts in the information displayed. i watch with an open jaw as everything ive spent all of my thought discovering is told to me... with proof! im more than just happy, im ecstatic to know that not only am i different, weird, an artist, smart, content, happy, happy with myself, happy as a part of everything else,and at a point of understanding, but im right, too. i can now go on with my thoughts, beleifs, and way of ife with more confidence than ever. and even better, i now know where to start with the change ive been wanting to make with... nearly everything. now that ive rambled what could be called a small autobiography into your comments, i think i will wrap up with saying i would not at all mind being someone to talk to about what you are learning---even if it is just through video. thank you for submitting these little chunks of expansive awesome.
Totally my style. Damn near perfect track.
It get's a little weird around "why do I feel so obliged" - like I can hear your voice crack in the not aesthetic way for a sec and the flow breaks. Otherwise, it'd make it into my collection.
Great, for something more along the lines of trance than I'd usually go for.
A little harsh on the treble. It does that earachey thing you get from really loud, high pitch noises.
Otherwise, it's pretty groovy. Could even see it extending into a long dance track with some killer base and a dirty breakdown.
im commenting mostly just so i can rate, since i cant put in my regular vote. magnificent composition and narrative movement+outstanding color work and just enough detail not to kill it= something i would hang on my wall even with a giant centipede creature writhing out of the center of it.
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