sausagename's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[S.O.S]

It's actually the lyrics that got me here.
The sound isn't bad, just too typical for my taste.

The writing, though. It hits home.

aLMiGHTyBuDDaH responds:

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you were able to take away something positive!

[Awesome Guy]

I agree.

SonicWombat responds:

o u *°·°*

[LB - Halo Revival Remix]

seems way too choppy before 1:50 for me to get very into it. i think that your drop should have been part of your build up, and the drop should have a lot more dramatic. i also think the base comes in too heavy too soon. i don't think the whole thing is bad, i just think it needs more work.

LazyBucks responds:

I don't make brostep, i.e. insane crazy drop stuff. Its intended to be choppy.
But thanks for the review anyway

[OOH]

dug this so hard it gave me blisters. i feel like it's missing one more element, though. right now, i'd rate it at beastly soundtrack. for a full-functioning environmental piece, id suggest one more subtle, yet crucial element. maybe something that will balance the harsh beat boxing with the soft, melodic vocals. for something that deserves more attention than a part of the environment, yet still remains chill enough to weave into the flow of daily happenings, i would suggest a female vocalist with a more jazzy sound (not r&b, JAZZ) scadding around. or possibly your own voice with some jazzy scadding. it sounds like you have that gentler range that can be more difficult to find in male voices, so you may be all you need.

phosphorusprocedure responds:

I was thinking about adding guitar, I wouldn't know where to snag a female jazz vocalist. But you do bring up interesting points to consider. Thanks for the review!

[The Endless Dream]

beautiful. things like this inspire me to improve my own trades, as well as to continue seeking others who have turned their hobbies into forms of art.

MarkySpark responds:

Thank you my friend.

[XS - Thunder]

i DO like it

its not bad at all, but the thunder isnt to par with what it oughtr to be. i didnt even register the sounds of thunder as thunder at first. see, youve got the "POW", but not the whole "CLAP-POW-BOOM!". i just think there needs to be more in order to really capture that roar. its a magnificent sound, and deserves to be awed at.having the entirety of the awe-catching sound would give your song more headway into that deservedness. otherwise, its nice to listen to, and congradulations on your placement in the top thirty.

-good day

Jimmypig responds:

Yeah I get you, I didn't think of sequencing the thunder as such but great idea! It's difficult for me to notice this stuff at the time but in hindsight I understand. Keep the idea and make your own!

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[The Notepad]

guitar in the background

same riff from ozzy's crazy train. give him credit please? that, and i dont feel like the chorus flows as well as the rest of the lyrics. i think it might be seperated a bit too much by the double voice and repetition. i voted five because the song is still badass, but the seven is for the reasons listed.

Murdaa responds:

well about the beat.. i wouldnt know cause i didnt make it.. so take this as credit for who ever diserves it. this is kinda a demo track as im now learning to eq my own stuff.. would be killer to have my own producer tho

[VENUS]

hmm.

youre pushing dubstep with this one. its not dubstep, but it is just reaching similarity. anyway, not a bad song. i almost wanna download it, but im picky about my music.

good day.

Caine1989 responds:

loool well, thank you for review man :]

[Not Enough Preasure {dubsteam}]

expEEErimeentsss...

okay, so i like the experimentation. the sounds that youve put in there are interesting, and genre bending can always be a plus. thing is, while i like the idea, its this particular song that im not really feeling it with. i think you need to find a way to pull some awesome out if your new sounds and use it to really make the song. do something to have it stand out and really make a unique feeling for itself. right now its so repetative its just like two and a half miniutes of sound. there are no strong pieces/parts that really build the song. maybe if there were a way you could get the steam-y sounds to wobble you could do a lot with that. it would relate it to dubstep more, too.

Decibel7 responds:

I agree whole-heatedly. If I ever decide I want to really make something out of this, I will definitely keep that in mind.

[Speedcore 300]

i can get into it

the intro threw me off some, but i can honestly say i was abled to enjoy the song. this is my first time ever coming across any speedcore, but it is definitely now in my preferred genres. i think as far as the intro goes, i was looking more for some muted badassedness pulled into full sound with the beats you had spotting it. i think something similar to the sound you had already would work fine if maybe it had some sort of melody in it instead of seeming to wobble around with no direction. this is just regarding the very beginning of the entry into the song, just so you know. my concerns fade when the deep voice like sound bleeds into a beat.

HNI responds:

I'm afraid I'm feeling too lazy to provide a suitable response for this highly insightful review, but I'm glad you enjoyed it!